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nanodsgn
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Tue Apr 15, 2014 9:21 am

New piece I've been working on. 2 layer screenprint. 18x24

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any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
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rghayati
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Tue Apr 15, 2014 5:19 pm

nanodsgn wrote:New piece I've been working on. 2 layer screenprint. 18x24

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any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Fun perspective with the bridge at that angle, great sense of scale with the helicopter included as well. I like it!
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:24 am

nanodsgn wrote:New piece I've been working on. 2 layer screenprint. 18x24

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any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
I like the image, particularly the mysterious low visibility atmosphere. It does have a slight "cut and paste" feel - where Godzilla is not completely integrated with the atmosphere and perspective for the bridge and helicopter. I think godzilla comes off as not as "huge" as his scale in the image would imply. I think this happens because he is not obscured by the atmosphere to the same degree as bridge/helicopter - he has a greater value range and contrast. This "cut and paste" feel gives the subject a slightly "goofy" feel that contrasts with the sinister texture and color scheme. This might be fine, as Godzilla is a "kitschy" subject to begin with. Kinda nit picky, still a great image. Also, a third color (red orange?) might add visual interest at the expense of seeming less sinister and more about fire/heat.
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:28 am

biggest thing to me that seems off is the perspective on Godzilla. from the assumed angle on the bridge, it would be very hard to get that angle/view of the top portion of Godzilla's head.

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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:30 am

nanodsgn wrote:New piece I've been working on. 2 layer screenprint. 18x24

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Looks great, and welcome to the forum!
looks like a fun screenprint Project. :clap:
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 11:55 pm

Two recent pieces I did. As with the other work I've posted in the past, all comments are welcome.
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Sat Apr 19, 2014 2:09 pm

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24" x 48" gel transfer and acrylic paint on a wood panel.
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Sat Apr 19, 2014 6:48 pm

chuckkeppler wrote:Image

24" x 48" gel transfer and acrylic paint on a wood panel.
I like the sense of open space, but I wish the border was thicker.
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Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:31 am

Doodle of Tyrion

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Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:35 am

Just finished up this original drawing
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Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:30 pm

Took what people said and ran with it a little more. Thanks for the feedback guys!

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Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:40 pm

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Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:26 pm

Def like the green better
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Star Wars Day is almost over on this side of the world. Just got this thing done in time after watching the trilogy!
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